Come Clean (a
Kevin J. Porter Mystery) by Kevin
J. Porter ISBN
0595245722 Writer's
Club Press 2002, 316
pages, paper $16.95
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Once Ronald L. Donaghe heard that my mystery thriller, Come Clean, had
been optioned for a feature film, he asked me to write a series of
process-to-product reports for the readers of The IGW.
It’s
January 8, 2004. I’m in Hawaii on vacation, still
excited from my
Jan. 2 meeting with two film producers, one assistant producer, and the
chosen screen writer. The nearly three-hour meeting focused
on
both writing the screenplay and discussing a potential TV series of
Kevin J. Porter mysteries. Always
thinking of writing even on vacation, I decided to take up
IGW’s
illustrious author/editor’s offer. So here is my
first article on
the evolution of Come Clean, my first independently published novel,
subsequently nominated for an Arthur Ellis Award for Best First Novel
and quickly followed by my being approached by film producers from
Hollywood and Vancouver, BC to discuss optioning it for a feature
film. Part
One: Idea to Published Book Late
one dark night in 1987 I was driving home after having taught a
night-school English class at a Vancouver college. The
highway
was lonely. It was a 20-mile drive to where I lived with my
wife
and daughter (our sons had long since been living on their
own).
As I drove, I became aware of a car ahead of me. I did not
attempt to pass it. As I followed the taillights, an idea for
a
perfect pickup by a killer flashed into my mind. I began to
embellish this idea until it unnerved me all the way home.
When I
arrived, I said to my wife, “Don’t talk to
me. I’ve got to write
something down.” I went directly to my office in a
little cottage
beside our home and wrote out the entire scene that had stuck in my
mind. Ten
years later, having had several textbooks published and now retired
from teaching. I was in the process of deleting old computer
files. I came across the 1987 document, read it, and got
scared
again. The pickup, the murder, the killer’s image raged in my
head as I
went to sleep that night. The next
morning I awoke
with Kevin J. Porter in my bed. Figuratively. He
said, “I’m
an ex-RCMP Officer and I’ve come to find your
killer.” Thus my
pseudenom came into being. Porter and I became inseparable;
nearly every morning I’d awaken to his voice in my
head. Neither
of us knew who the killer was. I’d go to
bed asking
questions and during the night and morning he’d
respond. I’d go
to my computer and write it all down. As we progressed, I
asked
Porter, “Why are you an ex-RCMP Chief
Inspector.” He told me that
he was caught in a “situation” with a young man
and, since the RCMP had
a no-tolerance policy, he was booted out of the Force. He was
soon divorced and living on his own in the West End in Vancouver where
he met the love of his life, Brent Barnes. The characters
became
real and I was on a roll. After
completing the first 8 chapters, I needed feedback. My
sister,
who is, to put it mildly, a totally horror-mystery-novel freak, was to
become my first test reader. I e-mailed the 8 chapters to
her. She
wrote back the next morning, “I’m hooked.
Send me the
rest.” “There isn’t any
more,” I answered. She insisted I
finish the novel, assuring me I was really onto a great horror
novel. I continued, writing and sending what I had
written.
If I missed a day, I’d receive an e-mail from her.
“Write, damn
you. Write.” Nine
months later I had completed my novel and went through the editing
process with her and an expert on serial killers. In 1999 I
started writing query letters to agents. One responded and
asked
to see the manuscript. Many letters of praise came from him
and
then silence. After six months, I received a form rejection
letter and my manuscript. I swear that three-quarters of the
pages had never been turned. Ugh! The exact same
thing
happened a few weeks later. Sent manuscript, received praise,
silence, six months pass, received rejection letter with the return of
my pristine manuscript Frustrated at the end of the year,
especially after receiving continued praise from friends and
acquaintances who read my ever-revised manuscript, I broke the rules of
dealing with one agent at a time, and sent out query letters to over
100 agents. A few responded but none wanted to see the whole
manuscript. Now in the new millennium and still unpublished, I revised
my novel again and thought, “Why not by-pass agents and send
it
directly to publishers?” I
inundated at least 100 publishers with query letters. Most
said
that they do not accept unsolicited manuscripts and suggested I obtain
an agent. Duh! A few wanted to see the first three
chapters, and two asked for the whole manuscript. Believe it or not,
two publishers expressed great interest, even assuring me that they
would publish Come Clean. Alas, months later, the unsoiled
manuscripts were returned with “Dear Author”
rejection slips. By
2001, with a stack of rejection letters cramming my files, I virtually
gave up, with one thought in my head: “Why
hadn’t at least one
agent or publisher begged to represent me?” Then
I happened to see a two-page spread on Trafford, a pay-on-demand
publisher. I was leery and the cost was high. Did I
really
want to self-publish? I decided to do a bit of research and
came
across several US pay-on-demand publishers. I wrote to five
authors who had published with iUniverse to find out their
experiences. Mark Roeder and Paul Wagner wrote back, praising
iUniverse highly. So I got in touch with them, paid my
$149.00,
sent in my manuscript, told them exactly how I’d like the
cover to
look, and within two months, I was holding my first published mystery
novel, Come Clean. I was really pleased with the
results.
Click on www.kevinjporter.com to see how good it looks. You
can
even read the first two chapters of Come Clean on line. Now
all I had to do was get the public to buy my self-published
book. But more important, I’m still
looking for that
elusive publisher to take over the selling of Come Clean.
(Ever
optimistic, I am currently working on another Kevin J. Porter Mystery:
Here Came the Grooms.) Kevin
J. Porter Stay
tuned for the next installment: Part
Two: Self-published Book to Movie Contract
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There isn't much you
can say about Kevin J. Porter, or information to be gleaned from his
bio on his | website. He
remains a mystery,
and so this editor at The
Independent Gay Writer can only offer this: stay tuned for
more
from Mr. Porter in this series of articles, "From Book to Movie."
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