SCIMITAR a Jan Phillips novel
by Michael Halfhill
ISBN: 1-4208-0700-5
AUTHOR HOUSE
1663 Liberty Drive, Suite 200
Bloomington, Indiana 47403
Retail: $14.95
From the first paragraph of Michael Halfhill’s sequel to
Bought and Paid For, Scimitar captures the reader, sets the mood, gets
inside his character’s head, and mixes description with emotion.
Halfhill writes, “Jan sat on one side of a well-worn sofa that
faced a large multi-pane window. Cheerful sunlight shot prisms through
the waxy glass illuminating a galaxy of dust particles floating in the
heavy Victorian style room. He sensed the décor was meant to
make clients fell comfortable—instead, it made him feel as if he
were in a confessional box at Saint Dominic’s Academy.” (p.
6)
In Scimitar, Jan Phillips is more powerful at twenty-nine and certainly
less naïve than the eighteen-year-old underprivileged lost boy who
first entered the world of the elusive Tim Morris. The story continues.
. . Jan is a successful attorney in the late Tim’s prominent law
firm, The Templars of Law. Jan is seeking absolution from the guilt,
pain, and emptiness he feels because of Tim’s unexpected death.
Tim left his vast wealth to Jan, and, by default, he has become the
North American master of the Mundus Society—a clandestine
organization that operates outside the realm of international law. What
Jan really misses is Tim’s love and companionship.
Having been bought and paid for by Tim, Jan wonders what his life would
have been like had he led a normal life, and had been free to choose
his own destiny. What would have happened if Tim hadn’t gotten
him involved in Mundus, if Jan hadn’t fallen in love with him,
and Tim hadn’t died, leaving him with an overwhelming legacy?
“Jan recalled a line from the Bible that defined this sense of
loss perfectly—the years that the locust hath eaten. But of
course the relationship ended and the days and months without Tim were
forever snatched back into a void where he could never follow.”
(p. 136) In his eloquent description, Halfhill shows the deep sadness
Jan feels whenever he remembers Tim. Jan even keeps the St. Roi
apartments just as Tim left them as a tribute to his lover’s
memory.
The flashbacks are not the main attraction of Scimitar, but rather
serve to enrich the complicated plot involving the Mundus Society. Jan
is thrown into Project Scimitar in his first official business when
escapees of the African Slave Trade show up asking for his help. Jan
would like to send them on their way, but he can’t help but feel
that he must somehow assist the two youths, apparently from Cirque
Afrique, who show up in the middle of the night, on his
doorstep—naked. His involvement becomes imperative when one of
them carries the international emblem of the Mundus Society with the
official seal of the African Chapter. Unsure exactly how to proceed,
Jan enlists the help of Tim’s friends and contacts, including a
physician, Max Atwater. This is the first step as Jan becomes more
involved in the dangerous world of Sudanese slave traders.
Sonia Santos has replaced her mother and now runs the household at St.
Roi; Jan and Sonia represent the next generation to inhabit the
apartment surrounded by its surreptitious world. Han, his bodyguard,
Joachim Nusbaum, and Daniel, Jan’s cousin, have joined the team
for Project Scimitar.
Even though the author leaves some of the characters’ plots
unresolved, it serves to entice the reader to read the next novel in
the series. There is some question about what happened to Kevin, the
kidnapped, mutilated missionary’s boy. And what happened to
Jan’s love interest, Michael? These unresolved issues loom in the
air and add to the intrigue, and beguile the reader to read Sons, when
it becomes available.
Michael Halfhill has firmly established himself as a writer who allows
the reader to use his or her imagination. Halfhill’s descriptions
include, “Makeshift markets filled with vendors peddling every
imaginable ware crowded the cobblestone alleys that led into the heart
of the city.” (p. 179) This, and many other examples of the
writing style of Michael Halfhill, conjure up vivid images whereby the
reader need not go far into the recesses of their brain to imagine the
scene. Yet the author does not spoon-feed the story, he simply makes
the reader hungry for more. The humor and intrigue of Michael
Halfhill’s novel, interwoven with his impressive narrative and
action-filled plot twists, earn Scimitar five stars. |
When Evil Changes
Face
A Motor City Thriller by Therese Szymanski
ISBN: 0-9677753-3-7
Bella Books, Inc.
Ferndale, MI 48220
235 pages/2000/$11.95
The fourth Brett Higgins’ Motor City Thriller
by Therese Szymanski, When Evil
Changes Face, is both gripping and sexy; Szymanski fans will be
delighted to join Brett and Allie on yet another adventure. This time
they are going back to high school…as students. The interwoven
elements of the plot, a writing style that Szymanski is known for, keep
the reader guessing, and glued to the pages. The main theme is evident,
but there is much more to discover under the surface in this
fast-paced, action-packed, high school sting.
Something sinister lurks in a small Michigan town outside St. Louis at
Alma High School. A dedicated teacher at the school, Leisa Kraft, is
duly worried about her students. Drugs are suspected, but it seems to
be more involved than kids experimenting with narcotics. Leisa hopes to
find out what is going on before someone gets hurt…or worse. She
enlists the help of her friend Madeline; together they come up with a
brilliant plan. Leisa and Madeline ask Brett, who made her money in
organized crime but is no longer in the biz, and Allison, a ex-cop who
has experience as a detective, to pose as high school students in order
to solve the mysterious change in the students. Brett and Allie are
reluctant to get involved at first, but Madeline, Brett’s old
neighbor, and her friend Leisa are very persuasive. They convince Brett
and Allie to go undercover as brother and sister under the guise that
their father died and they have relocated to live with their Aunt
Madeline. The plan is set—details worked out, and so the gals get
to work.
Brett does a very convincing imitation of a delinquent teenage boy and
even starts dating the stunning and desirable head cheerleader, Kathy
Moran. Against her better judgment, Brett pursues the nubile teenager
who is not available at first, but Brett wins her heart away from the
big, bad jock boyfriend Brian Ewing. Kathy befriends Allie who even
joins the cheerleading squad at her insistence. Once enrolled in the
school, Brett and Allie fit right in—but can a thirty-three year
old and twenty-seven year old really pull off the charade and discover
the truth about what is going down in Alma High?
Brett Higgins, a self-proclaimed “big, badass butch,” (p.
7) was twenty-three when she met her lover Allison Sullivan, who was
seventeen at the time. Brett and Allie have a wonderful relationship.
Allie has no problem when Brett flirts with other women since the
bottom line is that Brett is hers—all hers. But for how long and
under what circumstances can even Brett’s resolve to be faithful,
withstand the test? Especially when Kathy, convinced Brett is a boy,
returns her affections. Going back to high school as a boy leads Brett
on a totally different path this time around. “At least this time
there wouldn’t be any assholes calling her dyke, queer, and
lesbo. The worst time she could have now would be being called a fag,
which would just be funny.” (p. 28)
Effective flashbacks depicting history and the psyche of the characters
are presented succinctly. In one of many memorable scenes, we learn
what Brett had to endure at the hands of her abusive alcoholic father
when she was just six-years-old. The author uses genuine dialogue,
powerful descriptions, and evokes real emotion of sadness and rage. The
scene ends with, “Brett rubbed her healing ribs and crawled to
her father, wincing on her recently broken arm.” (p. 65) I feel
this says it all about a little girl who suffered physical and
emotional harm by the adult she was supposed to trust, but who used her
for sexual favors and beat her when she didn’t comply. It was a
heartbreaking scene that added much to the explanation of the woman
Brett became.
I highly recommend When Evil Changes Face to anyone who enjoys good
mysteries, juicy love stories, and hot steamy sex. It is fun revisiting
high school (from an adult’s perspective) with all the raging
hormones, turf battles, sports, dramas, and teenage angst. The story is
more than just erotica with its multi-faceted plot and complex
characters; it keeps the reader guessing all along. When Evil Changes
Face is a standalone novel with just enough background to fill the
reader in—but anyone who hasn’t read the prequels
isn’t at a loss. The author does an amazing job of tying up the
loose ends while setting the stage for the fifth Brett Higgins’
Motor City Thrillers, When Good Girls Go Bad.
You will not want to miss all six books in the Motor City Thriller
series. The sixth title, When the Corpse Lies (2004), is the latest
addition to the collection. Check out Therese Szymanski’s other
selections as well including, Once Upon a Dyke: New Exploits of Fairy
Tale Lesbians (2004), which has been nominated for a Lambda Literary
Award in 2005. When Evil Changes Face is a worthwhile read and rates
five stars. |